MEW+STORY

This is excellent!!! Some great language and expressions, good grammar and very well told. (well done Mew "Ahem!")

In a deep dark valley, somewhere on a mountainside in a land not far away, everything looked dead. No tree or flower could be seen and the only sound was of the icy wind that blew through this desolate place. No one dared to put a step in that deserted mountain valley. Even the animals had left, except for a few hiding underground. Only one pitiful creature walked openly there. He lived in a dark damp cave surrounded by ugly and blood thirsty bats. He was big and ugly and had long smelly fur and big sharp teeth. He was very scary.

Not far away in a village on the sunny side of the mountain lived a beautiful and cheerful young girl with long silken hair and two beautiful eyes. She was the most popular girl in the village. Her name was “Mew”. Mew loved to walk in the forests, she loved the sound of wind touching the leaves of the trees and there were so many animals running around. Beautiful nature; she loved all these things.

One day she walked into the forest to pick flowers for her mother. All the way she walked she daydreamed and wandered. Without knowing it the atmosphere had become darker and darker. She couldn’t see the way, She walked and walked among the darkness until she realized she was lost. She looked around herself and couldn’t see anything except dead nature. She was a little afraid. Mew took her heart in to her mouth and started singing a song. “song”

Suddenly! A blade of grass popped up! “How unusual” she said. She continued singing. Then another! She giggled “He he he”. Then flower pushed up through the black earth and sprang open. A bright red spot of color appeared in the black landscape, the first for many years. As she sang and giggled she was soon surrounded by the little plants and now a tiny worm wiggled out. Then, a ground squirrel and there. A rabit! A rabbit. When the little girl saw this! She wondered and stopped singing! The plants and the animals started to go back underground again. She started singing again and the plants and the animals reappeared. She was laughing and singing and dancing and slowly it looked like life was coming back to a little bit of this valley,

Suddenly! The earth below her shook. The was a rumble and thump and Mew “Aaaaaarrrrgh “Shhhhh stop laughing!” It was a beaver. “Shut up, shut up” Said the beaver. “Why?” Said Mew a little surprised “Because the monster will come and eat you!” “What monster?” and she kept on singing, the little rabbit playing with each other, flowers were dancing they had so much great time.

Deep in his black cave the creature stirred hearing so much happy the noises. “creature dialogue.lllllllllllll “Monster awoke and shouted “Who is singing?” and run to see what was happening with the loud noises. Hearing the noise, animals and flowers run for them life, only an unlucky rabbit couldn’t find a place to hide. The angry monster grab him from his neck and said “Why you wake me up?” Scare the rabbit point at the little girl. “What are you doing here and why are you singing you don’t know, this is my place? No one is aloud to sing or to be happy” Said the creature angry and continue “Who are you?” “My name is Mew” the little girl shaking with all her body “And I am lost”. The creature grabbed her with his hairy hand and asked her, “What do monsters eat?” “Berries.. Nuts..?”. Said Mew scared “No” said the creature with a smurk “Little girls!”

Just then Mew started to giggle, “He he heh…”What? Stop!” said the creature. “But you are tickling me he he he” she giggle more. “Stop it” thecreature choked. “Why are you.. he he. But I hehe he he. No No, hehe. “Arrgghhh stop this at once” “Listen” Said the girl “You are not so big and I am not scared of you anymore. Put me down now!” He threw Mew to the floor. I will not have laugheing and happiness in my valley. Then suddenly tried to tear the rabbit. “Stop!! Why!! Why so ruthless? Why you like to destroy everything?” Said Mew crying “Because I am a monster and it’s what I am doing” “You can’t eat me, I am the one who make you smile” “What smile?” Said the creature “The smile, when I said you eat Berries and Nuts.” “I never smile” Said the cr4eature smiling again. Look at the little rabbits nose and tell me it’s not funny The creature looked and saw the nose twitch and giggle. “You see? You smile again.” Said Mew “I am not smiling” Said angry the monster. “Look at the rabbit!! It’s so funny and lovely. How you can do that?” And Trixie stared to sing again Suddenly animals and flowers came back to lived again.“Stop!!” Said the monster was speechless now. He didn’t know what to say

“Tell me why you so sad?” Said Trixie Monster didn’t say anything he just looked around him the place was full of life animals, flowers leave, grass. “Tell me! We are you so angry and miserable" .“I don’t know” Said the monster with a low voice. “I have never laughed, I don’t know how is it to be happy.” “Never? ”Said Trixie “Your mom didn’t make you laugh?” “No” Said the monster “I have no mother, no father, no friends. Just me” “Oh you poor thing. No mummy? No daddy? No friends?” She hugged him tightly. ”I’ll be your friend.” Said Mew and start singing again

All animals were jumping happy and the forest turn to life again, as it was once. Monster was speechless he didn’t know that to say about this, but deep in his hart he like it. “Monster” Said Mew “Yes” “I have to go home now, my family will be worried about me” “I will take you home, but will you come to see me again if I am your friend.” “ I promise I will be back, we are friends now. Come on lets go” All the animals and the monster were watching Mew till she disappear in the forest. Then suddenly the monster said “Hey! Let’s sing there is no space for sadness anymore.” They sang a little son “Song”

Mew? “Yes” “Now can I eat the rabbit”

“Yes you can eat the rabbit now”